
तुम ही हो मेरी पहली ख्वाइश ,
तुम ही हो आखिरी तम्मना ...
तुम से ही हर बंदीगी हैं,
तुम से ही सीखा हैं महकना…
तुम ही हो मेरी सख्शियत की छवि ,
तुम ही मेरा आइना...
तुम से ही हर जुस्तजु हैं ,
तुम ही हो जीने का एक मात्र बहाना …
तुम ही हो मेरे लिए सावन की पहली बारिश और ,
तुम ही हो वो मिट्टी की खुशबू सौंधी सी …
तुम ही हो मेरी नींद में हर करवट की वजह और ,
तुम से ही हैं मेरी हर मदहोशी....
ज़िन्दगी से सिर्फ एक शिकायत हैं ,
काश तुम एक ख्वाब नहीं हकीकत भी होती ...
तो मैं ऐसा न रहता,
अगर मेरी भी एक “तुम ” होती ...
18 comments:
Kya baat hai janab... Good try.. and really innocent feelings...
I told u na, just feel it, you can do anything u wanna do..
Sweet lines, i wish you ll get ur तुम very soon...
Amazing lines for your 'Tum'... :) ..
wooh kya feelings hai
awesome kya likha hai bhaiya.
TUM
wase hai kyon yah tum .........
tu bas ha kar bhai "TUM" to hum aapki le aaengey..........well really good job h......great.
and dont worry ha.... ku ki sapne hi to sach hote hai........:)
Janab aap takkar deke aage nikal rahe ho
Good Going boss! :)
changing gears to hindi now, great.. nice work..
kiske liye ye poem likhi gayi hai??
am pretty sure, its for someone and not just a dream, :P
@Rakhee U know rakhee..ur words inspired me to write...so thnks a lot.. :) Just keep inspiring with ur sweet words.
@Urvish Sir appko to maine kabhi takkar di hi nahin thi.......u r far better than me...there is still way to go for me to reach even close 2 u :)
@Robin This is jst imagination..pure fiction :D...agr koi hua bhi to ye tumhe sabse pehle pata chalega..u know tht
ooohhhooo to sapne dekhe ja rahe hai... dont worry "KAHI TO HOGI WO.." ALL D BEST :) :) :) :)
Really fantastic...! Really u r The Mahesh Chauhan yaar...
bata nahi sakte k kya kya kar sakte ho..!!
Batao na kaun hai ye 'Tum' last line jus readers ko gumrah karne ka ek tarika hai ...hai na?
@supriya R u some detective or what? Koi tahkikaat karne ki jarurat nai hain :-) :P.....Neways thanks for appreciating...
BTW this is just a pure work of fiction n any resemblance with nething will b purely coincidental :-):-):-):)
at last poem in hindi from u......... really nice one big b ......... keep up the good work and we will see more poems in hindi fom u ........... aur kuch poem hamare bachpan ki masti pe bhi lkiha do....... its my suggestion to u ........try it big b ........plzzzzz... i want ur next poem on that okay ......... keep up the good work ............
hey man u r amaazzzz dear....u have quite changed mere mizaa galib....tum...the most beautiful nd lovable word in everyone's life....fantabulous lines dude....
@pri Thanks dear..I m glad u liked that...nahin yaar kuch khaas change nahin hua.........abhi bhi wohi Mahesh hun :)
Really good one.. I didnt knew it was written quite a while back.. And dont worry...
Someday.. sometime.. somewhere..someone is waiting for you!!
Thnx Bro :)
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