Wednesday, May 12, 2010

Am I asking too much????

Everyone is having some expectation,
as I am having.
Some are quite fair while some totally bizarre,
and I am not any exception.

I always gave my best or at least tried,
never put my feet down and never cried.
Now I just want a bit of luck at my side...

Am I asking too much??

Always tried to be there for everyone,
no matter in what situation is that someone.
Now I want a little bit of their help which is quite fair one....

Am I asking too much??

My shoulder is always free
for my friends, whether they need for putting their head or to climb a tree.
Now I just need a shoulder to cry on, just only one not three....

Am I asking too much??

Listened you whether it’s important or a rubbish talk,
always came whenever you need a company to walk.
Now I just want you to sit down with me for a while not for the whole clock....

Am I asking too much??

Tried to gave love always,
to everyone in every possible ways.
Now I also want a bit of love not flays....

Now you say...

Am I really asking too much?????

9 comments:

Rakhee said...

Hey..mahesh...u have done magic again...
Crying out your herat is so very poetic...
I just wanna wish you get everything after reading this...
You know the the special thing bout your poem is I can feel the pain in every word of yours...
I wonder, how beautifully you can pen down the pain you are carrying...
Dont worry ... everything has an expiry date... this phase will be gone too very soon..
just cheer up and happy writing...
So, i m asking much more from you ...
Eagerly waiting for your next one...
cya

Incredible India said...

Hey, a very well written poem... Kudos!!!
But, i am a bit concerned about you, everything alright?

If its just some random thoughts that are coming out in the form of this poem, its fine, but if its anything else, let me know.. at least i can ask and expect that much from you.

Kavita said...

ohh nice poem...
But i have one Question ,is this applicable to us??? if yes then this is not at all fair...we r always r there 4 u dear...Dont think u r alone...
Enjoy life best of luck...
Don't u dare to forget us..

Unknown said...

Bhaiya again a very nice poem....we all r always wid u...
ALL D BEST FOR UR FUTURE :) :)

Urvee said...

Bhai jaan.. Good one
Aapko kandha jald hi mil jayega...
kyunki
Har musafir ko rasta mil jata hai,
har leher ko kinara mil jata hai,
usi tarah mere dost, himmat na haro,
kyunki kar kutte ka din aata hai :P

sheetal said...
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sheetal said...

arey mere pyaare bhai ku hum logo ko emotionally blackmail karta hai.......well watever, u know i m always wid u & 4 u.

yar next time ek poem mujh pe likh na.....& this is not a request ,its a suggestion 4 ur nxt poem.

Kunal Gupta said...

nice poem yaar...
Purn vatavaran emotional ho gaya

mamta bajeli said...

very nice poem but itna emotional kisne kar diya aapko .......... plz aise sad poems mat post karna warna humko rona aa jayega ........... aur tension mat lena agar koi nhi hua saath main rone ko ya baat share karne ko toh bas apne is sister ko yaad kar lena jaha bhi hoge aapke pass aa jayege .............. bcoz iam always there to support or to give my shoulder to my big b ............ so never ever try to thing that u didn't have anyone to support u ......... iam always there big b...............